Teacher Feedback
We showed our video to the class and below is the feedback in which we received from the viewers.
First teacher feedback:
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- Acting is good.
- Good angles and the shot sizes.
Lying down shot is good.
To improve
- Sound editing needs to be smoothed out between transitions and levels.
- Voice over should be fixed.
Second teacher feedback:
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- Good acting.
- Framing is nice.
- Good variety of shots.
- Like the idea of jolly music... Could also use non dietetic sound to signify the massive tonal shift.
To improve:
- Walking shot with titles feels slightly off.
- Lighting/brightness not good in a walking scene.